Hallelujah (a haiku)

Wal-mart defines hell
Today it was heavenly
I found rain scent bleach


8 Comments on “Hallelujah (a haiku)”

  1. Melissa says:

    Wal-Mart is a lot better than it used to be. Now I don’t think they are any different from any other retailer. Except they have your bleach.

  2. Anonymous says:

    Haiku to you, from Guess Who:

    Un-discontinued?!!
    What an answer to your prayers
    Linen paradise

  3. kristin says:

    i am totally LOL! so happy for you :)

  4. Wendy says:

    Melissa – It’s still not my favorite store. I’m a Target girl.

    Guess Who? Wow, that’s tough. Laurie?

    Kristin – thanks!

  5. Tom Meltzer says:

    Bleach that smells like rain–
    What will they come up with next?
    Science goes too far!

  6. Fightin' Mad Mary says:

    your fortune cookie says-

    “buy in bulk for ultimate happiness”

  7. Miz Liz says:

    Did it satisfy
    Your highly sensitive nose?
    Or, was it a tease?

  8. DJ Kirkby says:

    I WANT! Make them sell it in England now!


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